帮我修改英语作文，我承认我英语不咋地，so帮我改好一点，我会给高分的。 改好之后用word的方 请帮我修改这篇文章后，我会给高分 ~~~~一点很重要，请修正...

这篇英语作文有错误吗？ 有错误请帮我改一下，还有结尾我觉得不太适合能帮我改一个好的结尾吗？？~

我帮你快速改了一下：）

Travelling is a good way to broaden people's horizon so I love to travel around my country when I have spare time.

Travel (旅行)是动词，名词的意思是旅途；a good way to do sth “是一个好方式” ；broaden horizon 开拓眼界（perspective也不算错）；

Last Friday I went to Qing Dao by train with my parents. It was the first time I took the express train which only used one day to get there.We arrived there around 6 pm in the evening and then checked in the restaurant to have dinner. The food in that restaurant was delicious. During night, we enjoyed the beautiful sight of urban scenery. What a exciting day!

express train 快车；behold 是看某人或某样东西，看风景最好用enjoy

Unfortunately, the weather was rainny on Saturday and the rain was so heavy that blocked us from going out.Therefore, we played cards in the room.

block sb from doing sth 阻碍某人做某事

It was sunny the next day so we decided to go to the beach. We had a relaxation and it was an enjoyable afternoon.

We only stayed in Qing Dao for few days but during these days we experienced a lot and saw many new things. It was an impressive journey for me!

大概就这样了：）

语法和用词都有非常大的问题，需要做比较大的改动，我作了以下改动，语法用词上基本么撒问题了。但是意思上，同学以后写文章的时候，最好还是把重点要表达的东西写的想的更清楚些。如宇宙探索到底最重要的可以带来什么？
What are the benefits of space research?

With the development of the society, more and more countries tend to join the exploration of space. Obviously, with the help of research space, many countries can get scientific and economic benefits. There are three reasons for the space research.

First of all, see from the economic aspect. We are in the competitive society; the financial affect of space has draw great attention throughout the world. For example, some developed countries want to get foreign currency, but the local tourism is not that attractive. So they build the idea to develop a kind of tourisms of space. After they are launched, a host of tourists would be attracted by this subject, such as visiting the space or staying at the space for a few days.

In addition, we can also see from the scientific aspect. I think it's very important. Nowadays the most difficult subject is a space research in the field of science. A report from China Daily showed that some scientists pointed out that if the government develops the space exploration that is exceedingly beneficial to the science, it will contribute a lot to the developing of the country. For instance, if the research in space makes great achievements, there also will be significant advancement in science and even political stance.

However, some people are strongly against space research, because they think this is a waste of money and resource of developing countries. I think this point is exaggerated and paltry. On the contrary, some developing countries need to have the way to develop their culture, improve their scientific, technological and finical strength. How can a country develop without space research?

In a word, I think the seeking of space is a topic which deserves public interest and concern. And it's important to cultivate the young get interested in it, thus the teachers should encourage them to read some book about space. By this way, children can not only widen their horizon, but also make their knowledge profound.

So I think the space research is beneficial for everyone.

Hi Karen

Haven't been together for a long time. How are you doing ?

I am going to hold a party in my home, from 7 to 11 PM on Christmas Eve. I hope you and your family can come to the party. I am looking forward to your arrival.

I'll prepare many kinds of fruits, salad, snacks and your favorite Beijing Roust Duck. A lot of friends are invited and we can enjoy the night together. It will be in our very precouis memories.

RSVP requested

B. Rgds.

XXXX（your name）

评语：
首先，这是一个信函，应该有信函的基本格式
逻辑有点混乱。既然是邀请函，开头就应该开宗明义，提出邀请，而不是放到最后一段
有些小语法错误
表达上有浓重的中式英语特点（我改了一些，保留了一些）
RSVP就是邀请函中常用的“来不来都要跟我说一声”的意思，这个是邀请中最地道的表达
内容比较简单，就不百度链接了。给不给分无所谓，希望能帮到你。

能不能给你发图片？